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Stone Cold Pyscho's Soul
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
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They wait, they watch and then they pounce...


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Feeling betrayed by invisible trust

Wandering streets searching for marks

A faced lined with character lines

Handsome deceit, rugged with time.

Hands like vice grips strong useful tools

Waiting, for the right job to do

Sizing you up like a precious jewel

He zeros in, his target is you.

Glimpses of the man he was

Adorn certain homes in picture form

Smiles so strained they seem to break

He took them to his special place.

Walk on egg shells, he'll teach you well

The air you breath is hot as hell

He shuns the rules, he makes his own

Obey or face the danger zone.

Love him, Ha, yeah at your own risk

He don't give a damn about you or him

Bear his children, if you dare

He'll take their lives like the Manson clan.

Don't be fooled, don't think "Your the one"

He'll love you right then tear out your heart

Confused and dazed you'll wonder why

That's if your lucky to survive.

Ignore and disbelieve if you please

He don't give a damn about anything

Oh, fellas if your feeling left out

If you think I'm hating on men, check this out...

There are women who are just the same

Love you down and play any game

Use you, chew you, spit you out

She don't give a damn just like her male counterpart...
 

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 Reviews of "Stone Cold Pyscho's Soul"
Reviewed on July 30, 2005

There are many esoteric faces in this composition, and many more
clear pictures of "Stone Cold Pyscho's Soul" - like the
psychopathic, plutocratic and despotic.

I leave this Den with my treasure enriched, and a pleased soul
in gratitude and admiration for the author of
"Stone Cold Pyscho's Soul".


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
Well Zee, it seems you are well acquainted with this type of person.
When I read this type of poem, too ofen unfortunately,I often think of some lines from Oscar Wilde's "Ballad of Reading Gaol"
For each man kills the thing he loves,
by each let this be heard,
The coward does it with a kiss,
The brave man with a sword.

I think the one you are writing about is a kisser, isn't he?

love
Ian

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 16, 2005
"In your face" reality check. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
You're right. But what can be done about it? Got to watch out always, for ourselves too. How close can a person really get to another?

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
Excellent! The power of your words jump off the page. Great work!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
So pleased to meet you, Mizzlady! I love your Bio and can fully relate to the things that make you "tick" that you expressed there. This is a rockin, rappin write it seems to me, with a strong sentiment and rhythm that beats to the raw energy of life. It speaks loud and speaks a truth. Powerful message, powerfully done! TY Kate xx

Reviewed on April 5, 2005
Oh yes, so true and excellently expressed. this is outstanding.

Reindeer

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2005
Wow! You really came to the point on this one. You surely have told the truth in this verse. We have to thank God that all men and all women are not like this though. There are good men and women, we just have to make wise choices. Excellent poem, Mizzlady Poetress.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 29, 2005
there are women who are worst
man have died for them
nations have fallen for them
Kings have knelt befor them
worshiped them
and forfitted their royal domain,
for that "thing"
**foot note "Helen Of troy"

WILLIAM .....PEACE

Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Mizzlady,

A most intriguing, eye-opening poetic write ... "top-drawer" all the way!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
If you think I'm hating on men, check this out...
There are women who are just the same

Quite sadly, I truly believe you're right, Mizzlady. And this is quite a write.


Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
BRAVO! Excellent!
I loved the way you put in there too that women are just as bad too.
I know all too many of these.. live and lived with too many too.
A powerful Poem of truth that I so hope you will get to at least the shelters and schools. Bravo!
Tracey xo
Happy Easter!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
raw and profoundly real!

Reviewed on March 27, 2005
WOW!!! Wonder of words. Excellent========illustrations. Mikii

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Excellently Done Good Right On Via Sex's Playen Mind Games...

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Yup. Some times I'm sure the word sucker has been stamped upon my forehead...

Takes time to trust again..

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Mizzlady,

This is all too true. It happens everyday. Let it not happen to anyone you know. You will join in the emotions. Good write, Mizz.

Emeka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
All too true Z~ Makes you wonder where true love is hiding!

Well done!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
So, how long have you been observing my ex, Z? ;-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Interesting thoughts, will have to think on this for a bit...~ed~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
I met one like this........I survived,,,,,,barely. Great write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
All too true this is....Zenith....been there know this well!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Very strong images. A poem writtem by a knowing person, not fiction. Yes, either gender is capable of being this cruel. Henry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
A sad reflection on mankinds treatment of each other. Happy Easter

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Unfortunately, your words are all too true. Best wishes to you.

M.Rose


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