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Yes, a whisper
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It feels like a… yes, a whisper;
a light, or maybe its inception   
through that gap that occurs just before our hands touch;

Then, it is dark -
no gap, just skin to skin;
it feels like a… yes, a whisper,
from a second ago to now, just before our lips touch -

And we become the kiss;
the light, again, or maybe its inception
through the gap that occurs in the dark
just before breaths come together -

And silence feels like… a whisper;

Yes…

 

- © 2008 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®

 

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 Reviews of "Yes, a whisper"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
A beautiful poem.take care :-)

Edwin

Reviewed on December 7, 2008
So very beautiful. I'm sure I speak for all when I say welcome back, you've been very much missed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
And such a lovely whisper of poetic expression this is, Alexandra. It is very nice to read you again. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
beautiful.........and so very much your signature style........:) pax A

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Nice poem Alexandra...your thoughts show that deep emotion attained within the essence of each combined expression...the simpleness of each thought defines the depth of your work...

an enjoyable return...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
smooth and sensual ...

los saludos… pueden subsistencia de la vida usted activo y bien ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Alexandra, This is so softly romantic and loving. You are an extraordinary person. Welcome back, surely have missed you.
Much peace, love,and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Good to see you back Alexandra and with such a stunningly soft sensual write that heats up the night...
fee

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Beautiful, Alexandra*; it almost feels like a companion piece to my "There." I particularly love "through that gap that occurs just before our hands touch." This line captures the anticipation of "becoming." To be aware of this "gap" is to be fully in the present moment in a very conscious way - savoring each step and not rushing toward an end. It is, in its relative way, the "journey."

Reviewed on December 7, 2008
(((Alexandra!)))

Oh, how I've missed you: I love the imagery in this, particularly in the second stanza: gorgeous!! Welcome back.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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