I saw you in concert
And had to meet you
I went backstage
To ask for your autograph
I lingered too long
You didn't seem to mind
"How old are you," he asked
"Probably not old enough", I answered
I was a little shy...
You were a bit bold
"Will you go out with me?"
"Yes, I will" I answered in awe
"I'd love a cheeseburger and fries" he said
"I know just where to go' I replied
A late night dinner
At "Hamburger Heaven"
The food was wonderful
The conversation even better
And we flirted outrageously!
"Heartbreak Hotel" playing
On the jukebox so loud
Recognition of you
Amongst the diners
Almost causing a riot
And a stampede of female fans
The good night kiss
At my front door
Your velvet lips touching mine
Spoiling me forever for all others
The future King of Rock and Roll
So sweet, so young, not yet a star
A snapshot in time
That still brings
A smile to my face,
Special memories to my heart.
Joy L. Hale
Copyrighted 2005
All Rights Reserved
Love ya!
Jane
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
in your heart and the intimacy of these wonderful lines.
-gene.
Thanks Dick ( The REAL King)
BEAUTIFULLLY WRITTEN. ANNA
considering the subject and the occasion,
the dominant couplets flow almost matter-of-factly,
and the entire experience of two young people
with their careers ahead of them sharing
a happy, worthwhile experience.
This is fine indeed.
John
You kissed him! You are in miraculous command of your subject, and I simply dissolved into you poetic words.
xx Christine
Anna
and told with such sophistication as well!!
Lady Vivian
Regis