Feelings of love flow softly
whenever the slow music plays
it gets me in the mood
to dance with you, always
each time you put on a song for me
our nights become a romantic fantasy
I knew you'd bring me joy evermore
the moment I saw you
step thru that prom door
I waited patiently that night
For just you, to notice me
the last dance being held in your arms
sealed forever, my destiny
and now, so many years gone by
you're still the apple of my eye
We've found passionate fulfillment
within the words to every song
with what we find in them, we know
we can fix whatever goes wrong
There are the ones we made love to
the first time we lay together
there are those we danced slowly to
when we vowed to join in love forever
And those many we have made up to
they're so dear now, to me and you
if music can sooth the savage beast
our love isn't in any danger in the least
So we'll just keep on dancing
and living by the words to every song
with the belief that we'll go on and on.
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You wrote this like the words to a slow love song...soft, moving, sensual but with the dream of all love should be and more.
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Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Hi Denise
How I wish I could have persuaded my husband to have dance lessons. But when we shuffle around, it's still great. Loved the poem. Cheers! Liz
Hi Denise,this is a wonderful poem.Your pen danced to the rhythm inside of your hands and on the floors of your paper.You know,I was thinking about dancing with my girlfriend one day under the Manhattan Bridge near the sand,water and rocks while there are candles around us in the cool night of the summer,dancing away in bliss as our hearts are the radios to each other with a special connection that will never disturb our signals of love.I enjoy reading it,take care
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How I wish I could have persuaded my husband to have dance lessons. But when we shuffle around, it's still great. Loved the poem. Cheers! Liz
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