D r e a m V i s i o n (poem) by Asa D. Seeley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 4, 2012

Remaining aware of sentient gifts--nurturing them, avoiding any weakness of a damage-driven-ego vying for self destruction either through self-loathing and or altered states of consciousness to escape or get attention--this piece jumps off the page with High of an inquisitive mind, a mind that is ready to fire up upon rising, imagine and make his or her own reality. Loved the subtextual energy in this.

Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2012

Thank you, Asa, for sharing your beauty in words of art..Such a pleasure to read your work. You're very talented. I hope you know this.
God bless you always and in all ways..

Sandy

Reviewed by Vicky Semones

Reviewed on August 8, 2012

Mom, the images are amazingly appropriate to each poem. Asa, we are all imprisoned within ourselves, until we deeply surrender to the 'one' Divine energy that supersedes each of mankind's constructions. It is in each of us and is every one of us. You have the vision. Believe in your soul. Do not measure yourself by the world's expectations.
Blessings, Vicky

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on May 17, 2012

A vision within the bounds of the earth, with a mind, heart and soul,
that is boundless, Your expression here Asa, is truely an insight from within, and can only be seen by one who dwells in its depth and forms his expression from the clay entwined with its roots. Beautiful work!

Namaste'
dan

Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson

Reviewed on April 29, 2012

Asa,

You need a spanking. Mama, Spank his b------. You are so talented. The imagery is unbelieviable. There are no impossible dreams.

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on April 20, 2012

As I also felt this, so lovely... I like this vision. :)

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 15, 2012

TO DARE TO DREAM IMPOSSIBLE DREAMS IS THE BEGINNING OF WALKING BY FAITH...NOT BY SIGHT. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 23, 2012

Glorious vision shared!!! xox :-)

Reviewed by Ruan Mills

Reviewed on March 13, 2012

It is in the poet's skill to portray such a ambience as this. You have that skill,Asa. It shows in every word. It would be great to see you published.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on March 12, 2012

He's brought the sun a little nearer today with this upside down poem that works beautifully and illustrates the excellent maxim, KISS, keep it simple, stupid! Hope the clouds roll by soon for Asa!

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

Lovely description. Sometimes the sea becomes the sky or a mountain vanishes into a cloud. thank you for reading my poem. Rainbows

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 17, 2011

You have the walking on clouds.

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on September 12, 2011

Superb. To feel what one sees and be able to articulate it in such a lucid way is a gift worth keeping.

Reviewed by Daniel Keith

Reviewed on September 11, 2011

Keep the hopes and the dreams alive Asa. Well written. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on September 9, 2011

"Dream Vision" indeed, Joyce! Yet it's lovely, there should be blessings coming for Asa, soon!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

a wonderful vision indeed!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 28, 2011

There is much depth in Asa's poem! His imagery produces visions that can be crafted into individual ideas and thoughts....M

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 23, 2011

Deep words of purity unfolding like a delicate flower....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on August 23, 2011

Exceptional poetry from the heart. Keep on writing poems like these for you never know the life you will touch.

Yours in the love of Christ,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 23, 2011

"dream vision" is opening the door that unlocks all possibilities -- imagination and creativity flow in endless streams from that portal -- Asa, your expression captures that moment of personal enlightenment quickly, poetically -- I bid you peace -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 22, 2011

..this brings me to tears..WOW!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 22, 2011

Asa,
I love the directness of this poem. Very nicely written!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Glen Manese (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2011

Liked how the last line fits everything into unison... Of course...I see what I feel... The picture sets this off in motion... Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 22, 2011

From the heart and soul of a poet comes writing such as this...to inspire and tweak the imagination! Creative and uplifting! Well done, Asa! Never let the ink in your quill dry up! You are a wonderful writer!

Anna

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on August 20, 2011

so much said in lines that flow and are as uplifting as the warm light. Thanks for sharing. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on August 20, 2011

Wonderfully written poetry indeed Laura

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 20, 2011

You help us to venture forth today with understanding and vision ~
Wonderful poem!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 20, 2011

Nicely done.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 20, 2011

VERY BEAUTIFUL, TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on August 19, 2011

Very good...I really like this piece Asa.
Blessings,
ann

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on August 19, 2011

Asa wrote a short but very sweet piece here. I would like for him to publish his poetry. He certainly has the talent for it.
GOD BLESS YOU, Joyce, and Asa too.
Tony

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 19, 2011

Nicely done, Asa. I can relate to what you have shared through your verses here. Thank you and thank you, Joyce for sharing this. Love and peace and blessings,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 19, 2011

Asa,
You have that quick and direct way of catching
and holding the reader...words, mood
and point of view penetrate and stay.

Thank you, Joyce, for sharing with us.

John