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Good memories (Tanka)
by J. K. Roseline → (All Poetry by J. K. Roseline)
Monday, October 17, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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In Japanese the tanka is divided also into the upper section (the haiku-like beginning) and the lower section (the two long lines). The art and crafting of tanka comes from the relationship and how it is expressed between these two sections. Often the middle line acts as a pivot — think of a garden gate that swings both ways — so the thought in the upper section can change to another thought in the lower section. This change must show a new voice, place, time, or mood

 

 

 

 Sounds of  charging wind

Tossing to my hair  and face

 Passionate love play

Warm  my thoughts for you in mind

Longing for the time we loved

 

 

 Artwork  pleasures mind

 Like flowers it brings  much joy

Creating good vibes

He  lived  happily  quite long

His soul rests in peace


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 Reviews of "Good memories (Tanka)"
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on October 19, 2016
Some lovely imagery contained here...
And you have created a captivating atmosphere...
Love, Diana...

Reviewed on October 18, 2016
Thank you. I learned something new today!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
While you have certainly written beautiful lines, trying to make it fit a tanka structure seems to have ruined the mood.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
Some good, relaxing lines here, J.K.


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