Keys (poem) by Tiffany Lynn Simar on AuthorsDen

Keys
by Tiffany Lynn Simar → (All Poetry by Tiffany Lynn Simar)
Thursday, January 25, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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I wanna push you I wanna feel you up with my fingertips I’m between the asterisks you will find a sigh Because a little love is better than none at all I try to concentrate I try to make this one count But I pout if I stroke you wrong Hit the back space Such a pretty face She loves to erase my wrongs QWERTY is so sexy And he makes his point by putting himself out there I love the feel of your keys Love it when you cry out “Pretty please, touch me” That feel against my fingertips That sound of pounding, pounding down As I type for my life once more I love your keys I love my paper and pen But I cannot wait to use you again To cheat with you should be considered a sin As I push you down, down, down Seeing letters appear on the screen Deep moving words brought to life before me Strike after strike Space bar and enter see it all but they never complain So let me feel your keys Give them to me Life bearing dream Coming to reality Carpal Tunnel will never catch me What a love this love can be And it is all for you and me My sexy, clicking, clacking, magnificent keys By, Tiffany Simar 1/25/18”

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on January 26, 2018

Lovely poetic write! It sounds like the keys make lovely music that pleases. Even teases? Squeezes? LOL

Reviewed by Tiffany Simar

Thank you both :) and Ron, it�s the computer keyboard that you plug into your computer. A normal laptop keyboard just wouldn�t do ;)

Reviewed by Mystic Rose

I have enjoyed your creativity. Well done Tiffany. keep writing

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

A very sensual and enjoyable piece of allegory. It is obvious that you are madly in love with the creativity available from the keys of a typewriter or computer. I always laughed when I heard the clickety clack of secretaries pounding on their computer keyboards when all that was required was a soft touch without any sound. Obviously they're years of working with hard to push typewriter keys and become an ingrained routine that they couldn't lose.

Don't be so sure about carpal tunnel. My sister recently had it done at 65 and my mother last year at 92. I'm sure both of them from their love of typing on their computers.

BTW, I'm in love with this dictation system that allows me to leave one finger typing behind and spew out all this garbage I do on AD just for the fun of it! ;-)

Ron