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You Didn't Know Me
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Dedicated to someone I knew a long time ago...

 


 



I walked behind you

Followed your every step

Wanting to walk with you

No matter what path you chose

But you didn’t notice me

 

I sat beside you

Hanging on your every word

As you spoke atop the pedestal

Where my adoration had placed you

But you didn’t see me

 

I called out to you

Begged for a moment of your time

A touch of your hand

An opportunity to open a door into your soul

But you didn’t hear me

 

I knew you

I looked beneath your skin

And behind your eyes

I loved you for your inner perfection

I wish I could have told you

But you didn’t know me.

 

copyright(c)2004 Crystal-Rain Love


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 Reviews of "You Didn't Know Me"
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Oh, MY!!! Crystal... this is *PERFECTION*! Ohhhh.... I *know* this feeling, oh so well! You have touched my heart deeply with this! I can't find adequate words to praise you enough for this. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
A beautiful write. Very good!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Powerful write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
BEAUTIFUL POEM!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
loved it, right to the point, and with sludgehammer weight, loved that line abot the open door al

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
hauntingly beautiful..and do you wish you had said,rather than waiting to be noticed? we need to communicate not expect or judge.This is a very moving write,it is not good to cry at 4:45am :))
absolutely gorgeous piece Crystal

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
This is haunting to me. Perfectly written! A gem!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
So sad I'm guilty of feeling unworthy, only to find out, to late how others knew how she also felt,I was haunted by that for some time,this sums up that feeling perfectly, I swore the next time not to be of faint heart, and not be scared to fail,or painful rejection.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Awww, Crystal-Rain! You know you idolized and I am still doing it. The person in question could not have been "inwardly perfect" if they did not at least acknowledge you. But I know well that of which you write and it touches me to my soul's depth. Thank you for sharing this offering, Rain. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Wonderful words indeed! I love this!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)


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