Clouds Break (poem) by Walter LaVerne Jones on AuthorsDen

Clouds Break
by Walter LaVerne Jones → (All Poetry by Walter LaVerne Jones)
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Into this world we pass but for a moment
*Mom yells as clouds break* *Sleep works edge of sun* *Clouds call us to sail on by* *Love is free* *Play while you can* *A difference in love we see* *She was the dreamer* *I am seen* *Keep me in your life* *As the wind and rain* *Live in our life* *Song on wind* *We are the willows of time* *Song that I feel* *Words oaf the heart we steal* *In corners of time pressed hard* *The poet sings to the bard* *I have my time* *Whiskey* *As measure of her pure wine* *Lover in pride* *Smile on side* *Whisper to see* *Truth in her eyes* *Light of life* *Signs in mirrors* *Burn bright* *So it is I cry* *Longer each night* *Moon on a one room* *Pillow and kitten clean* *Some live to dream* *Jeans old torn by heart ache* *Wonder the knife* *Lord knows as the wild birds go* *Man keeps his vestige planned* *Chronicles ride* *Heart my inside* *Pride in corners lied* *A song surprised* *Hair into neolith* *Stars burn the story rant* *Time as the piano plays* *Last of son on face* *Guitars die-hard* *String�s forty* *Screams drink down* *We go slowly in memories* *Mom calls in last of children lost* *One room cast clean* *Dream John dream*

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 3, 2008

A with much to ponder...powerful imagery plays with the thoughts of one's mind as the reader reads and reads again...you pull the reader in with the ambiance of this write, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 30, 2007

"In corners of time pressed hard The poet sings to the bard" - I like these lines especially. This is a unique poem with a dream-like quality. You evoke many images throughout this piece, drawing emotion along the way. Great work!

Sheila