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Foolish girl
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foolish girl--
don't hide your love away,
let it stay...
leave it be...
don't be afraid to give your love
for free.

when you step into the room
and his eyes are
the first to which you are drawn--
it isn't wrong
for your heart to smile
through your eyes
and for the corners of your lips
to rise.

foolish girl--
who are you trying to protect?
why not let your love interject
a heartfelt, toothful grin
projecting the sweetness
from your insides
to him.

take life--
take this love--
one rhyme at a time...
for it's fine to feel alone,
natural to be complacent,
important to be patient,
when dealing with
your passionate heart
which you've known from the start
can't be supressed
or hidden away--
you gotta let it stay...
leave it be...
and for heaven's sake, child
don't be afraid to give your love
for free.

with every step in life
you'll learn and learn--
so don't be concerned!--
your horizon holds
the brightest of colors and shades,
and this love of yours right now
will sparkle or fade,
but either way
you'll discover that beautiful someone who will repay
a love even more true
than the love you feel today. 

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 Reviews of "Foolish girl"
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Sweetheart is the word to describe you, sweet meaning innocent and open and the advice you give to yourself here is precisely true. You have to live to learn-there is no other way, especially in the affairs of the heart. Good stuff! Jerry

Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2005
You go girl!! Jerry-How else are you going to find and recognize the boy/man you want to be with for awhile? Never expect a lifetime, baby.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on January 28, 2004
charming and peppered with wisdom, good work Madeline. in life one has to be foolish sometimes to enjoy it.

peace and happiness

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
I like your style.
-James

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Fantastic write!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Oh my yes what a truly wise splendid piece!
BRAVO!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
My oh my Madeline, you've outdone yourself this time! Let the love flow... You seem like one that might know how to do that... ;) Congrats on a nice piece... ;)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
madeline, very well written. Your wisdom compliments your words.


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