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rise in consciousness
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Thursday, September 1, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 this victim mentality

and inferiority thinking
are plagues of the mind
we cannot
simply battle this
in the same ground
where it lies
child,
rise in consciousnes
you are a tremendous 
Being of light
in you, the negative
has no bearing
darkness was not meant
to comprehend your might
forget the monsters
instead, let the flowers
spring from your depths
awaken the state
where the horses run wild
beside the cleanest streams
and farther beyond
the riverbanks
gently meeting the sea
let every weed
sprout nuggets of wisdom
always decree goodness
in thy kingdom
you are the gardener
of your mind
thou shall not falter
let thy love
be blind.
 
©A.max Sept. 1, 2022

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 2, 2022
A lot said about thinking positively about everything and expecting the unexpected pop up in a positive, beautiful way. Sounds like a life coach giving advice to someone with an inferiority complex.

BTW, weeds have some of the most beautiful wildflowers anywhere. Wisdom comes from appreciating that and not trying to kill all of them with Roundup.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 2, 2022
The images you invoke in this lovely poem serve your purpose well, encouraging us to see beyond the surface of ourselves well into the interior where knowledge and light reside. Well done.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 1, 2022
Constructed similar to a poetry surveillance survival guide and social media promotion. During the twentieth century, the FBI closely monitored poets, read their work, and speculated about their political and artistic intentions. American surveillance agencies even hired people with backgrounds in poetry to be spies and code breakers because of their skills in close reading, language analysis and critical thinking. Surveillance poetry is now privatized, commercialized and increasingly participatory. Poetry helps us understand the machinations of surveillance all powerful, coded lines here, I see the bluebonnets of Texas and the horses of our youth.

"let the flowers
spring from your depths
awaken the state
where the horses run wild"

rise in consciousness has the poetic flavor of intelligence-based social hierarchy and surveillance. I enjoyed the analysis and digital genius scribed herein.

Duo

Reviewed by Poets Soul
Reviewed on September 1, 2022
Wow little sis, When are you going to write a book. The world needs enlightenment like this.

PS


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