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tiny fertile garden
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Monday, September 5, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 better days 

are always on its way
the clouds move
through the happy whispers
of the cool wind
breeze humming
with the bees
as carpet of flowers
laid out 
on a thousand fields
the perfection of a day
forever held hostage
in your perception 
arrested happy days
screaming to be freed
from the steel bars
of a limited mind
does a dove
hold the key to reprogram 
this matrix called
your own mind
go on and free yourself
attempts may be feeble
but always try
for the Spirit within
always hears
child,
you are the one
who holds 
your own light
yes, discipline
and soon you'll erect
poise and charm
while carrying the torch
of your life's
grand plan
how wonderful it is
to live and be alive
every step of your feet
releases chuckles
at every stride
bouncing to the neighbor's
hum of cha cha cha
as you both greeted
each other with a dance
ahh this purposeful life
is a forceful might
child, the Spirit calls
through cleansed intuition
disarmament of reason,
judgment and prejudice
be intelligent enough
to let love be
thy protection
and kindness your spell
let your seeds be felt
by your brothers
until you have seeded
this entire universe
joy, and mountains of it
beams and streams
of magnanimous bliss
feeling the completeness
from within
potentialities, 
endless possibilities
wildly escaping
oh such tremendous energy
transforming capabilities
to so much beauty
originated from 
a single grain 
there's still more
surprises awaiting 
from this humble
tiny fertile garden.
 
 
© A.max Sept 6, 2022

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 Reviews of "tiny fertile garden"
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on September 9, 2022
I enjoyed this immensely…
And always more sweet surprises from this
Tiny, fertile garden…

Diana…🍃

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2022
Absolutely a masterpiece of real fruit in prolific senses

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 6, 2022
A beautiful garden of the mind laid out in poetic form as a stream of enlightened consciousness that spreads ripples of insight out into the world.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 6, 2022
Yes, much can come from a fertile mind that frees itself from prejudice and blockage of any kind. To be free to think like nature does when the time is right for the blooming of spring and the harvest of the fall.

When we put our minds to making profit and destroying nature in the process, we are small minded.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 5, 2022
~Sativa Wishes and Indica Dreams~

The abundance disperses with the autumn wind the seeds of change. Invest wise, darling! This is a seasonal tour de force, your lyrical poetic voice upends the prior matrix. This piece raises the bar. IMO, a hybrid juxtaposed visual of The Garden of Eden and Chariots of Fire ensconced through your words.

"does a dove
hold the key to reprogram"

Absolutely! These two lines are attuned to Christianity which emerged out of Judaism by the way, out of a paradigm shift. Major changes coming in how people think and get things done through the principle of paradigm shift that challenges the status quo, or some revolutionary innovation or discovery. We visionaries hold the key to reprogram, so with a bit of shapeshifting, the World turns like the yesteryear soap opera drama As the World Turns, Wings giving us the freedom to fly untethered in our mind, body, and soul, and all controversies. I say it thrice, a mantra, what you said,

"while carrying the torch
of your life's
grand plan"

"while carrying the torch
of your life's
grand plan"

"while carrying the torch
of your life's
grand plan"

Duo


Reviewed by Poets Soul
Reviewed on September 5, 2022
I would say that your garden of the heart and mind is simply beautiful Little Sis. May we be forever blessed with the fertile garden in your mind.

PS


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