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priceless
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Friday, September 9, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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today's my birthday, ya'll be nice.


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 we serve internet

to the people
all day you'll hear
them dropping coins
in the wifi machine
 
but now-
the power's out
so here they are
talking to each other,
playing chess,
and having some laughs
 
in a few feet
you hear giggles
not of girls
but of 
middle aged men
i asked them
what's funny
 
they tell me
glad the power's out
i missed my friends
we missed each other
 
i thought
they were goners
turns out,
all we needed
is a power outage
 
it may be
crazy hot
and i'm sweatin 
like a lion
who already done 
a hundred of those
them felines
 
it's okay
for now i know blackouts
surely can
resurrect the dead
back to life
 
suddenly, 
electricity is back
i smiled at the man
both business 
and wifi are on
 
okay girly,
just a bit more
let this be our secret
please
i ask this as a favor
 
just an hour more
so me and my brothers
can render each other
the connection
without our phones
 
hey! power's back
i heard one cry out
time to check
some notifications
one's daily dose 
of endorphines
 
i told him
it's pure gossip
go finish your chess
can't you see
i'm still 
bathing in my sweat?!
 
i glanced 
at the middle aged man
smiling ear to ear
radiating with much joy
his expression- 
priceless, magnifique.

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 10, 2022
Yes, nothing like a power outage to get people back together, actually communicating with one another again.

But there's another side to it. They used to call it around here, "a shortage." Probably because a transformer shorted out. And I saw people in the streets. Jobless and just wandering around. Gambling but not chess. Sweating in the streets and waiting for something, anything, to come along and kill the boredom like a fight. so that gossip could begin again

Power outages do give me time to read the old-fashioned way while the sun shines and more sleep when it doesn't. For most of my life I have been a loner, so I don't engage in gossip on my phone or on the Internet.

Ron

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on September 10, 2022
Your insight is astounding when you write, love it :)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 9, 2022
Scripted black glove poetry darling! Flipping the switch. Power generates chaos magic! Your birthday hasn't come yet, a little early. I have your present wrapped when the day comes! Priceless! Look under the bed! Zodiac and electricity equals sexual chemistry!

P.S. You don't have a brother. XX

Duo

Reviewed by Poets Soul
Reviewed on September 9, 2022
So true Little Sis. I was having a conversation about this subject today. We have forgotten how to have a real conversation. Write On.

PS

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 9, 2022
Yes, an interruption such as a blackout has a volume of worth to anyone who has become entrenched in the digital age to the point of 'Digitism", the malaise of the age. So many have forgotten the rewards of person-to-person, eye contact, and conversation. Thanks for the reminder of what we need to keep in contact with.


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