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arising within
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Monday, October 31, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 as within, so without

one can view it as a terrifying rule
or a malleable law of our reality
and of course you'd feel
that the environment is 
the extension of self
for it is still your consciousness 
outpictured in this 3D world
as within, so without
the law of Being
gracious and forgiving
like a beautiful garden
of probabilities and what can be's
if we begin now
taking them weeds out
and replace them with
flowers and better greeneries
or remain here
in your present conception
of self
keep asking what if
should i do it
will i actually progress
we'd never know 
if we don't try it
so do it
and hold the vision
of that garden 
until the world
gives you confirmation
of what you hold within
so dear, start that 
dreaded mental diet
to stimulate that awareness
and quit it with the judging
and condemning
it is only you
in every Being
as you clean out
your beautiful garden
all Beings would be
exalted through you
soon you'll realize
it is not only the garden
that you have within
but you are 
the entire Earth
so let's start- clearing
lifting everyone up
redeeming every part of you
emancipating, sacrificing
old thought patterns, your old self
now look at you
a true beauty
carrying such immense
marvel, conviction, and intensity
this must be it
the most talked about
grand awakening
the new Earth
arising within. 

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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 20, 2022
WHEN OLD THINGS ARE PASSED AWAY, BEHOLD ALL THINGS ARE BECOME NEW WITH THE INDWELLING OF THE HOLY SPIRIT WHICH ENLIGHTENS US(AWAKENING IMAGINATION) AND FILLS US WITH THE HOPE(ARISING WITHIN)OF ETERNAL LIFE. AND THOSE OF US WHO BELIEVE THE PROMISE OF THE 'NEW EARTH' THAT IS TO COME HOLDS DEAR WITHIN OUR AWAKENING IMAGINATION THE THINGS WHICH WE CANNOT EVEN BEGIN TO IMAGINE THE BEAUTY OF...SO THE WORD OF GOD SAYS. LET THERE BE NO MISTAKE; THE...ARISING WITHIN...MUST BEGIN AND END WITH ALMIGHTY GOD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on November 6, 2022
With this inner world cleared out…everything is possible!
As within…so without…

A clear message to act now for the grand awakening…

Diana..🍃

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 2, 2022
"The new earth arising within" This is an intriguing image. A novel could be birthed from those 5 words. Peace. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 1, 2022
You have a unique way of telling people that the problems we face tend to come from inside us and we need to realize what we are doing may not be right and we may need to change drastically what we are doing in order to make this world better for everyone rather than the shortsighted view of our world from a warped, shortsighted, imagination.

Thanks for warning us,

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 1, 2022
An exceptional poem about the world within and without. Also an
exceptional poet with the same qualities.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 31, 2022
Your poem offers a "recipe" for long-awaited peace in the world, Audrine. Thank you for sharing your uplifting and hope-filled sentiments. Love and blessings to you,

Regis. 😎🌺🌳💚🌲🌷🦋

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 31, 2022
Marvelous exploration of many alternate answers and even more alternate questions. If only more would allow the streaming of their acuity and emotions to find purchase in some form of creative grounding... oh, how much healthier would our world be. Another gem of honesty and suggestive behavior for all who doubt. Bravo.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 31, 2022
Indeed, "the new earth arising within" is reflected in the conception and presentation of this remarkable poem that delineates so much that is of value amid the dregs of what should be discarded.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on October 31, 2022
That new Earth that arises within has the capacity to make miracles of grandeur happen every day. You as a writer are a miracle in itself, I enjoyed your poem Audrine :)

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on October 31, 2022
Great message in this beautiful writing.

Reviewed on October 31, 2022
Beautifully penned, Audrine. I have often wondered who decided what was a weed or a desirable plant. A unique poem.


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