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hidden force
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Friday, November 25, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 here you are standing

in the midst of the ocean
letting yourself be swayed
accepting all the push and pull
of the waves of life
always at the mercy
of external stimuli
 
one day, you were told
you can walk on water
psychologically traverse 
endless states of mind
it does take some faith and courage, 
to attain the level of self-persuasion
and know the outside world
is not for signs and confirmation
 
you were told, you have
this inner strength
to reveal in you such a character
unmoved by the world
at the calmest with your strong conviction
whatever the senses perceived
relieved, it didn't matter
 
for you know you are the hidden force 
in every situation 
the causation behind circumstances encountered
but, will it be alright 
if no one knew, not a hint of recognition
of the noble ideals you projected
here in Caesar's world
 
and just be content in knowing
that out of this cesspool 
of thoughts and suggestions
you remained loyal to your vision
humbly acquired dominion 
over worldly ideation, and it was-
your imaginal act that started it all. 

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Reviewed by Corrine Ardoin
Reviewed on December 6, 2022
This is a very thought-provoking poem. It reminds me of various disciplines I have explored, each one teaching me the beliefs each held. While, all the while, within myself, I knew the truth and no one, not any teacher or guru or class, could tell me what I needed to know. Do we need recognition for what we know within ourselves? Do we need to write a book about it, so everyone knows how smart we are? It is amazing in itself without shouting it from the mountaintop or becoming another guru. That's what your poem reminds me of. Thank you!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 1, 2022
Very eloquently expressed! Jesus comes to mind as I read your verses. Thank you for sharing, audrine. Love, peace, and blessings to you,

Regis 🙏🌸💕

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 27, 2022
Beautifully written.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on November 26, 2022
Yes…always stay loyal to your vision…
Keeping true to your inner ideals,
and your strong convictions…
Adjusting them from within
through hard acquired experience…
A very thoughtful and interesting
Poem Audrine…

Diana..🍃


Reviewed on November 26, 2022
A wise and uplifting poem, Audrine. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on November 26, 2022
wow this blew me away, so thoughtfully expressed, strong with inner conviction intact. I love your spirit and your creative pen today, keep up the influential writes, they never cease to amaze me :)

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 26, 2022
Einstein once said that imagination is more important than knowledge. So you are in good company. But your views on possibilities, and character, and vision are inspirational. You have come of age, dear poet. Keep up the good work.


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