very good imagery... like other poets mentioned not really traditional haiku... i would also refrain from personal references like "she" but otherwise well done!
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
This is lovely imagery, but haiku is 5-7-5. Even though its not haiku, it is very beautiful and a very good write!! (((HUGS)))
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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
You did really well with this! I can't write haiku :|
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Thank You so much.
Tracey
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Ty, Dani
I thought true haiku was 5-7-5 ?