I took a walk one day in a quiet, rural area and wrote this poem.
We meet here
in this place of
soughing wind.
Leaves of trees,
they rustle.
Dry grasses,
they shimmer in
the light.
I come alive to
step as a deer
I am
to feel as a youth
I am
to dream of myself
in better days,
these days
coming anew.
Why no one calls
or sends their cries
unto the wind,
I never know
with, this,
my mere mind,
nor in my eyes,
but wonder
in another realm,
wandering
with the stars,
dreaming
of the time
I was young
and sought out
quiet places.
Yes, that is where I live,
in quiet places,
like pages blank,
not for what
has yet to be written, but
for what yet lies
ahead...
a blank slate I
can bring to my heart to,
once again,
write there its song.
Such a beautiful and charming piece Corrine…
Your poetry always makes me ‘feel’ the experience you are describing, and encourages me to
Compare with my own…they are often almost identical…
I felt so at peace after reading this…
and wondering what lies ahead too…
Hopefully writing a new and happy song…
Like you, I love quiet places. Your poem, so beautifully written, took me back to those many times I walked and observed, alone in nature. While it seemed quiet except for the rustling wind, I imagined a beehive of activity of nature with plants growing, insects working and animals hiding from me in the trees and grass.
A wonderful place to think about our lives and to compose poetry.
To what you express via your verses here, I can completely relate, Corinne. It is as though I could have written your words had they been gifted to me. And, your poem is a fine gift. Love, peace, and best wishes, namaste...
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Your poetry always makes me ‘feel’ the experience you are describing, and encourages me to
Compare with my own…they are often almost identical…
I felt so at peace after reading this…
and wondering what lies ahead too…
Hopefully writing a new and happy song…
Love, Diana…
A wonderful place to think about our lives and to compose poetry.
Ron
Regis 🙏🦋🐬🐟🌳🌲