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Sensual Thoughts
Soft morning light,
that infuses warmly
into the waking soul.
The incandescence
of the midday sun,
that sears like your passion,
raging through every
pulsating vein and sinew.
Serenity like the tired day,
when she rests her weary head,
shuts her eyes
allowing peace to reign.
in caped dreams.
Darkness luminescent
with the soft white aura,
emanating from the perpetual
majestic brilliant orb.
Celestial bodies
scintillating upon the dark backdrop,
and whispered nuances
of sensual phrases,
captured on the wisps
of a gentle breeze.
Emotions swell,
tremendous love surges,
ecstasy flows
like a profluent stream.
Desires stirring within
like butterflies set free.
evoking with tenderness,
the amorism of loving warmth
and emotional intimacy.
~*~
Copyright Elga ~Indigo~
25 February 2005 – All Rights Reserved
10H20PM
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Keep it up dear - you are an Angel.
Imre
Though the visual obviously excites the Male mind...:) You have penned this with tenderness, and it projects the love of a woman!!
Whomever told you otherwise, must have their heads stuck in erotic fantasies, not reality..perhaps
I love the art too!
Warm Light, Love and Peace! Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
STay FOcused!
Blessings,
Joseph
A sunny delight
Joy and more joy
HH
it very sensuous.
Love from India - Joel -
Take care,
Sherry
Well now I've had me cold freezing shower.
It was a wasted use of water.
So a boys gotta do what a boys gotta do.
Blimey see what happens if you whisper this poem in to a blokes ears.
Not a good Idea.
Yet to seya write even a ok poem.
You sure got a fab gift.
Some people don't know what true passion means Elga!;-)
love,
eieen
I think this is a powerful write. To me this is a reverie.
A dream of a distant/absent lover. The words come thru here
with class and clarity. Your emotions are like a gentle glimpse that you allow the reader to share briefly. I personally feel this is beyond grand. I am partial to rhyme, and rarely connect to poetry that does not....sometimes I can pick out a line here and there, that makes me go.......wow....but thats just the way my brain works, when I read....its just me....(not being judgemental)
But..........
This entire write has me enchanted. And thats not my norm! I am just that way.....its like having a preference for a certain sweet!
yum!
pax A
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
This is a beautiful sensual write that flows from beginning to end.
Felix
Pragtige foto...is dit jy??
Daai tieties is wel gevorm...lol!!
Love Tinka
The pic on the actual poem didn't come out but as I had seen it up top it didn't detract. I don't agree that this is not one of your best. I think it is one of your finest. A tender, romantic almost whimsical write with barely suppressed passion flowing through every line. You do this so well!
Love Chants
I enjoyed it.
Lisa