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Keep Building On!
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Keep Building On!

 

I feel frustrated with the continual hindrance
At times imposed emptiness exasperates me
And hovering, is that false sense of loneliness

 

Though I am so filled with love, happiness and joy
A little sadness sometimes flits like a hummingbird
Who's drawn by the nectar; that sustains its energy

 

I swallow those bitter pills you lace with untruths
And they ease through my being causing no ill effects
Yet ironically I notice you seem more affected than I

 

As you prolifically spin and weave bristling yarns
You’re designing garments to suit your own needs
And textures and colours seem obscenely obscure

 

My comfort resides within my solid foundations
My honour enhanced by the trust I have earned
But you weaken yours every time you build on!

 

© Elga ~Indigo~
4 November 2006 – All Rights Reserved
07H13PM
 

 

  


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 Reviews of "Keep Building On!"
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
Excellent work! What talent you have! Holly

Reviewed on January 7, 2007
Wow! I love this!
YOu touch deeply! My friend!
I haven't seen you around in awhile~
I hope you stop in at my corner of the den~ Alot shared from my heart
To yours/etc.
I hope I haven't been one to say anything out of line, that would
of saddened your heart!
WARm HuGs,WArrior Sheeeoxxxo

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
excellent work here...the flow of rhythm in this is exceptional really...a beautiful lace like effect within the tercets...all presenting sharp truth....well done my friend.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
Soulfull and truth laden write Elga, you've been missed my friend your work is always such a pleasure to read and always immaculately presented.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Such truism, Elga. This is a wonderful poem.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Exceptional write my friend. You are a gifted wordsmith and when you weave your word tapestries they are woven with truth and as a result are always beautiful to behold.
Take care and know that you have support and love
Chanti

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Deeply touched by you!!


Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
as always, your poems touch the heart ...

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Love it! Especially 'I swallow those bitter pills you lace with untruths/And they ease through my being causing no ill effects/Yet ironically I notice you seem more affected that I' How prophetically true!

Chrissy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 4, 2006
I can relate to these soul-reaching sentiments, Elga. They actually make me weep. Love, peace and strength to you,

Regis (Reg)


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