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The Foreshadow Canticle
by Luciano Pimentel → (All Poetry by Luciano Pimentel)
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Take me out of oblivion
life-giver, heart-maker
Give flesh to my soul
earth-shaker, fire-breaker
Make whole all of my spirits
sea-mover, breath-taker
A part of me all frailties
star-designer, sun-wrecker
So that they counterbalance my pride
Soul-taker, soul-maker
And that shall suffice amply
in taking me out of non-existence
So that I can shine as brightly
as You meant me to shine
from the very Beginning
from the Dawn of Time
Ravish me Greatness Incarnate
So I can shed this mortal coil
and the stench of death
in which I toil



Copyright ©2006 Luciano Pimentel


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 Reviews of "The Foreshadow Canticle"
Reviewed by Annette Bruun (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2006
A deep and truthful prayer comes across - very touching - very good:).
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
In the Flesh body we become limited but by spirit we are new and always alive. This is powerful...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
A poem that exemplifies Creator in a unique way! Welcome to AD!

ET
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Yes ... this body does have its limitations, but for those in Christ there is a blessed future that involves an entirely new body.

A powerful write ...
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
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