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Lonely
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
  
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There is no loneliness worse than not being loved for who you are...


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Have you ever been lonely?
Felt that still deep well of pain?
The real lonely…..
Not just the absence of friends

Lonely is a child…..
Lifting her arms for a hug
That no one sees
Or wants….

Lonely is a girl
Who has never known acceptance…
And sees only shuttered faces
Reflected in her seeking eyes…

Lonely is a woman
No one sees
Or cares to know..
Always found wanting…


Lonely is a deep abiding ache
A desert..
Where the sound of her weeping
Is never heard


A wasteland of loss
Where truth is dishonoured
And love is a contract
With terms and conditions


Lonely is a woman
Who is not seen
Or heard
Whose words fall silently
Like tears…


Lonely is lost
With no safe harbour
No place anywhere
To call home

Do you know lonely?
I do…..
It is the savage beating
No one sees

The rape of body and psyche
That scars the soul
Throbbing unseen
Like an unwelcome friend
In the cold dark hours of the night


It is the pain of a terror...
No one understands
The reaching for a loving hand
But there's no one there..

That's real lonely…

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 Reviews of "Lonely"
Reviewed by haim kadman (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
So much deserved praise by so many, what can I say - it's overwhelming.

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
A beautiful poem dear Candida.

Greetings from Atlanta.

Ashraf Gohar Goreja
Goreja.com

Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Achingly poignant and beautifully expressed.

Reviewed by Jan Peregrine (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Beautiful. You've captured it.

Reviewed by Susannah Carlson
Reviewed on July 17, 2003
And it is the reason many of us, as adults, write.

I felt that.

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
I see loneliness as a preparation for times when valuing the presence of another human being is crucial. There's always hope.

Adam

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
You have certainly gone for the jugular with this one Candida. Overpowering passions here and so well expressed the words seem to reach out from the page.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
My Lord, Candida this rips my heart out. This is so very powerful and REAL.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Hi Candida,
This very discriptive writing was very well written. Only the lonely knows the pain of this lifestyle!


tony

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Candida,
Im impressed! I like real, you got real going on....keep up the good work, Damn, aint honesty a beatiful damn thing!
Rodney Evan Bohen


Lonely is a woman
No one sees
Or cares to know..
Always found wanting…

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Hi Candida, I left the previous comment but forgot to log in first.....smile Just wanted you to know....smile

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Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Oh my! Candida I have never read a better description of loneliness. You have truly touched the essence of what it really is. This one goes in my library. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Awesome, awesome....I bow to your talent. ~Kerry


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