AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Judy Joy Jones, iMargot Dillard, iEdie Batstone, iLaura Cavanaugh, iScott Zachary, iShirley Woods, iBob Brink, iTrennis Killian, iDean Cambourakis, iGwendolyn Thomas Gath, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Danielle Mundy

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· 127 Titles
· 1,051 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jul, 2004

Danielle Mundy, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Cellar
by Danielle Mundy → (All Poetry by Danielle Mundy)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Ok, ever since I read Jerry's Zejel poem I've been dying to do one myself, so I sat down and wrote one today. :) It went on kind of long, but I really enjoyed the process and the rhyming. Thanks for showing us so many different styles Jerry.


the drips they echo in this hole
overflowing their ceramic bowl
flooding the ground in a new role

your smile unseemingly wry
haloed by the darkened sky
sending out your words like lye
burning scars deep in my soul

you left me here to die with naught
grasping at every random thought
wishing now that I had fought
so that I may have ended hail and whole

growing weary in this endless night
knowing now you are but a blight
indulging in your own respite
lounging time away upon the knoll

brush away the salty tear
tamping down distended fear
hoping that my eyes might clear
that I may finish this tattered scroll

wonder now where it went astray
giving in to my own dismay
realizing that pain is your forte
confinement finally takes its hefty toll
  

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Cellar"
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Unfortunately I don't know this guy (should I???), but I really love that poem of yours.
Good write.
Love
Amira

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
effective and well composed ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Very nicely done, Danielle. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on April 2, 2006
Beautifully done.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 2, 2006
well said

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 2, 2006
Very-very well done WOW!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 1, 2006
Danielle,

An excellent, thought provoking write; very well penned. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2006
THIS is great! You sure as heck put it all together and come up with one dynamite zejel. You kept the premise all the way through the poem, didn't wander over here, stop and stare over there, this was very good. Thanks for giving it a shot. Bet it won't be the last one that you do.


New Poetry by Danielle Mundy
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Reality Repair Rx: Knowing What's Up and What's Not by William Cottringer

This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.  
Member BookAds

Visions of A Skylark Dressed in Black by Aberjhani

“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to  
Member BookAds

Flights of Fancy Volume 1 by Dawn Huffaker

A collection of poems that show my unique outlook and style.  
Member BookAds