Heaven can wait, ‘cause there’s hell to pay, I’m stickng around to see the day, You best not think that you can get away, You’ll rot to the bone like tooth decay.
Play the role of friend, but you’re so cruel, Stirring up trouble, then acting cool, In the end, you’ll be the biggest fool, You’ll get a lesson, not learned in school.
A sweet caring façade, to gain trust, Soaking up attention is a must. People think you’re so righteous ‘n just, Lurk in shadows, ‘n daggers you thrust.
Use who you wish for personal gain, Keeping yourself on top, you’re so vain, Twisted schemes causing heartbreak ‘n pain. Your parade’s over, ousted by rain.
Cynthia, this is an extremely well penned, powerful write, illustrating the often and well-deserved pitfalls that shall prevail in the end on one’s parade who lives within the precarious darkness of deceit. Your tremendous poetic talent soars with this magnificent composition, my love. I especially loved the closing! Thanks for sharing it.
I love you,
Tom
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Wow This is so true and you've written it so Powerful I know so many people like this and have just this attitude going on right now. Very Powerful Strong Poem.
Love tracey
It sounds like this rain canceling parade was a blessing.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2005
I sincerely hope so Cynthia. This is a hard hitting exposure of evil and just so everyone on this board will know, I have not turned anyone's poetry into mangagment, this is one thing they can't lay at my door unles they want to try it falsely.
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Cynthia, this is an extremely well penned, powerful write, illustrating the often and well-deserved pitfalls that shall prevail in the end on one’s parade who lives within the precarious darkness of deceit. Your tremendous poetic talent soars with this magnificent composition, my love. I especially loved the closing! Thanks for sharing it.
I love you,
Tom
Love tracey
M.Rose
"Rain, rain, go away ... " the rhythm and verse is definitively perfect ... thanks for this outstanding offering!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Way to Go girl!!
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Allen
some very nice person turned my pyscological poem in to management!;-)
True peace is inside, no matter what is happening externally...