Nice job - gives an outsider a sharp insight into your fears and anger. Your words are not so deadly as real bullets but they do pierce and shame us. We will probably never be able to admit that, thus never be able to change it. Keep writing ...
This is my first time reading your work. You are a Writer with a soul which cries out that someone listen. You are a man of depth and passion. Sadly the laws of our country have failed certain ones in our society. Cultures and greed have forgotten the common man. Death today comes in the night in the day. Just a name forgotten.
Continue to write with power. Open the eyes and hearts of your readers. Touching piece of work.
Reviewed by MYA LOPEZ
Reviewed on February 27, 2007
HEY, THIS IS MYA-
AND I ENJOY READING YOUR WORK. ON THE COMMEN MAN. YOUR ARE A VERY WISE AND DEEPLY TOUCH YOUNG MAN. WE (THE WOMEN) NEED MORE MEN LIKE YOU IN THIS WORLD. FOR SAFE KEEPING. YOU CONTINUE TO BE SUCCESSFUL. AND I'M GOING TO CONTINUE READING, IF YOU CONTINUE WRITING.
Such a simple commonality, always complicated by the thing that makes us common. . . our humanity.
blessin's, strong message Bro. V.,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by sarah playle (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2005
Another powerful poem. I like how you all brough it together at the end, "What we all have in common is man" If we lived by this, maybe the world would be a different place.
THE COMMON MAN is a powerfully rendered statement that is perhaps particularly relevant at this time in light of what the devastation along the Gulf Coast has revealed about the ignored plight of the poor in this country. Those who don't have to think about it obviously prefer not to, but as your words make clear, our fates are linked by our common humanity and no matter how much more materially wealthy one might be than another, we really can't afford to ignore the truth. This is a politically passionate and insightful write.
Part mystery, part fantasy with a twist of science fiction, Clues of Chaos is brimming with suspense and adventure that will have you racing to the end yourself.
Winner 2016 Pacific Rim Book Festival in Science Fiction category. Honored as
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Continue to write with power. Open the eyes and hearts of your readers. Touching piece of work.
AND I ENJOY READING YOUR WORK. ON THE COMMEN MAN. YOUR ARE A VERY WISE AND DEEPLY TOUCH YOUNG MAN. WE (THE WOMEN) NEED MORE MEN LIKE YOU IN THIS WORLD. FOR SAFE KEEPING. YOU CONTINUE TO BE SUCCESSFUL. AND I'M GOING TO CONTINUE READING, IF YOU CONTINUE WRITING.
blessin's, strong message Bro. V.,
cynth'ya lewis reed