It is not that I only see your beauty
I feel it
I thought it was clear,
a perfect perception
I looked at her for recognition
She pretended to stare instead
at the whirlpool in her coffee
letting her tongue remove the residue
off the spoon
This is what I am talking about
I would die to be the spoon
Even though it was not focused intent
you cannot ignore the sensual litheness
The flower hugging the vine
waiting and coaxing the bee
Chair legs scratched the floor
as the cup was brought to the sink
the ebb increased setting my mind to foot
to again be near the source
Here let me help you with that
So selfless was I
Yes that would be good to believe
as my hip brushed hers
Don’t you understand
I know of the east
The intricacies of philosophy
I know the taste of the lotus on my tongue
and the pulsations before the dawn
You see the water flow to the drain
its clarity as it moves towards the pull
I am this liquid flowing into the vortex
leaving my existence to fill yours
Doubtful eyes looked upon me
with you’re just saying that look
until my eyes showed her the truth
and she understood
Wow! ! thing to say- a cigerrette AFTER this one! and I don't! smoke-LOL - Hows that for a metaphor- This is Powerfuland ILoved it. I can't even type straight.. YOu got me again Mr. W- Lady,Sheee - I am enjoying your feelings -expressed so Vividly in your sTyle of Poetry. I do mean this!!!
Tantalising, Walter, and loved the way you took us slo-mo through this blood-rush scenario! My coffee cup would be rattling all the way to that sink if it were me! Sultry and exotic images compliment the domestic setting and keep us on the emotional tightrope. Just love the penultimate stanza: it's concepts I want to swirl around my palette like a fine wine. Can feel the heat from here. Brandy, anyone?! :)) Great write, thank you. Kate xx
You give us no excuse NOT to do the dishes anymore. Proof that even the most mundane task can be put to muse with skill.
blessin's to you Bro Walter,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
sensual,loving pulsating..
...hey Walter you've DONE it now! From NOW on every time I wash dishes I'll think of this..damn!
Magnificent write..saved this one...ty!
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
~Linda
"I know the taste of the lotus on my tongue
and the pulsations before the dawn"
powerful!!!
blessin's to you Bro Walter,
cynth'ya lewis reed
...hey Walter you've DONE it now! From NOW on every time I wash dishes I'll think of this..damn!
Magnificent write..saved this one...ty!
Vesna:)
Love Tinka
Eileen