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Bottled Promises
by Sandy Knauer → (All Poetry by Sandy Knauer)
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Unrequited love

Bottled Promises


 


I promise


Two words spoken


One heart broken


But they’re silent birds


Those empty words . . .


Rents I can’t mend


Cash that won’t spend


 


Unrequited love


 


Closed doors, endless wars


Freeze me to the core


A hostile friend, pain without end


A thirst I just can’t quench


Two words, time and again


In a game I’ll never win


 


Bottled Promises


 


Sandy Knauer


 


 


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 Reviews of "Bottled Promises"
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2006
better than not to have loved at all, yes? i still maintain that only love is real.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Sandy, this is a masterpiece,

...bottled promises...

these are everywhere...food for thought
Safi

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Dearest Sandy
Thankfully these experiences make us stronger and lead us closer to that one true love whom we crave deeply in our hearts. In hindsight, when we find the love we've been loving all along, we will thank any unrequited loves for helping us find our true soulmate that much quicker. If its deep in your heart then so it will be!
Lots of love to you Sandy
In friendship Suzie xox :-)

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Fantastic write. Rings true. I like it!

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Maybe we're not meant to win at the game. Maybe the best we can hope for is to have some chances to play. Love can be as cruel as it is beautiful and although we are all very similar,in many ways we differ. Our only saving grace is the fact that we are constantly changing, at times that draws us closer together,yet it can also push us further apart. Life and love should'nt be so complicated.

Excellent, Pierre.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Bullseye Sandy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2006
I really like this. Sometimes that bottle gets lost, floating on the sea, eh?


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