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A Brittle Wind

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

No, it's NOT a sonnet
bored of writing poems with lofty ideas

Saturday, December 10, 2005

It’s raining, mud puddles are digging deep
stretching their lips to sip from a barren earth.
I’m waiting in a pigeon coop for the sun to peep.

A brittle wind shapes a vase and then a hearth
in the sky. A lonely lady steals a moment to weep
behind dark windshields driving up north.

Her son, alongside crushing a candy, sleeps
every night hearing stories of a man, whose absence
rules his small world, a world his friends can’t peep.

She can’t help but sacrifice, as this distance
has never been smaller over last two and half years.
He lives ten thousand miles away; his presence

is more a play of shades mixed in her tears.
She wears dark glasses to hide her fears.

Copyright© 2004, Debashish Haar, All Rights Reserved  


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Reviewed by Odin Roark
Reviewed on October 20, 2024
a wonderful display of language intersecting images that blast into a landscape of imagination where bending emotions and exciting image choices make you unique. Keep it up. I love this kind of thinking.

Reviewed on March 4, 2007
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
This is a perfect picture of missing someone. There is power in your words.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
the physical distance of father, leaves his family in fear and sadness ... a powerful message that unfortunately is much too common ... i can see this relate to the present mideast war ...

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
WOW! This really touched me. good job.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
like the defined characters you've drawn here with your superb word choice. and cool rhyme scheme, whatever it may be. Dawn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
A soul-stirring and most compelling write, Debs. Starkly real and sad but universal in thematic meaning. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
A very deep sad state of the heart! Relationships like this
are usually ones people can't seem to come to grips with!
Superb poem on the topic D!


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