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Sunday, January 22, 2012

My dreambook effaces
itself before the last page,
as the words grow
and struggle
till the story ends.

There is no name
for this dream or struggle,
as all the words are grinded
letters that do not make
meaningful sounds anymore.

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Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 23, 2012

some dreambooks outlives their usefulness ... it's then time to write a new one with letters that are orchestral ...

like the direction you took this one ...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 23, 2012

A recurring dream that has worn itself out with the playing and which, perhaps, our mind has trained itself to weary of before it now completes. The repeated "struggle" with those glottal double-gs makes me think of a strangulated birth and the good use of "grinded" to be sonically effective leads well into that final line that leaves us, as it were, with an empty stage. So good to see you here again. Do hope you're well. xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 23, 2012

Has a sense of entropy.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 22, 2012

I think that you share in this poem a timeless and universal theme (although sad) of this life/world, Debashish. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

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