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Modifiers

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

Friday, August 7, 2015

Not the time of the day when men perspire adjectives
and discuss their pay packets;
when they have no point to negotiate
incentives spraying adverbs,

stroking their cell phone babies.
The dogs in the streets are busy licking 
used up tissues and napkins; though they swallow 
the scent of whatever they can’t chew. 
Still, friends exchange sweets and mementoes, 
lovers worship closeness. 
The day stretches to take the flight of birds; 
the insomniacs are stoned to sleep, 
children forced to read junked literature.

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ashiff Jivraj
Reviewed on October 26, 2015
Days of the same. Nicely put. Ashiff

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 11, 2015
Good to see you posting again, Debs. So many extraneous words are used to express so very little and nothing that is worth saying; even the dogs know that less is more! Friends and lovers know what makes for completeness. Love that line: 'The day stretches to take the flight of birds;' while, by contrast, the children are left with just the junk to feast on. Excellent work as always. xx

Reviewed by ChrisTopher Stone
Reviewed on August 8, 2015
incentives spraying adverbs
Enjoyed the images here as well.

Thanks,
Chris

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 8, 2015
In the heat of the day, life's modifiers appear most clearly.

I really enjoyed the images this poem conjured up. Its adjectives were superlative.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2015
You surely have me thinking with these verses, Debs. Been a while. Hope you are doing well. Love and peace,

Regis


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