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A Little Boy's Prayer
by Pearl Pennington Blevins → (All Poetry by Pearl Pennington Blevins)
  
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This little boy speaks to Jesus in his nightly prayers.

In the darkness of the night the little boy slips out of bed,
Drops to his knees, shuts his big blue eyes, and bows his head.

Dear Jesus, please don't get mad for it's only me again,
You know I love you and you always do what you can.

Each night I talk to you and ask the same things over and over.
And I'm sure by now you know I have a new dog named Rover.

My mommy and little sister love Rover, I'm sure they do,
And Jesus, "Why don't my Dad come home and love him, too?

He must not love us, Mommy, my sister and surely not me,
But I know if he saw Rover, he would love him too you see.

My friend, Jimmy across the street has a big dog,too.
Sometimes I look out my window and see things they do.

Jimmy and his dog have so much fun, 'specially with his Dad,
I'm glad for him but sometimes it really makes me sad.

And Jesus, When my Dad went away it made my mommy cry.
I love her so and to be the man of the house I really try,

But it is very hard and the nights are so long and dark,
And you must know how much it helps when I hear Rover bark.

Jesus, does my Dad live with you? Mommy says it is true ,
And that he loves me, so would you tell him, "I love him, too.!"
Goodnight Jesus

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 Reviews of "A Little Boy's Prayer"
Reviewed by Isaiah Zerbst
Reviewed on March 4, 2012
Here is my suggestion for making the verses flow smoother: It appears that you are writing this poem in 7.8.8.7 meter, at least that is the meter that I found fits it well; you could also use a similar one such as 7.8.7.8. or 8.8.8.8. Ideas should be separated at least somewhat by the lines of poetry, as if using commas and periods. In makes it much prettier and flows smoothly. Here is an example that I have meterized for you:

In the darkness of the night
The little boy slips out of bed
Drops to his knees, shuts his blue eyes,
And then he bows his head.
Dear Jesus, please do not get mad
That I'm asking these things again
You know I love You, and I know
You always do what You can.
Every night I ask from You
The same things over and over...

Reviewed by Donald Balsley (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
I like it. We can all talk to Jesus any place, any time, and any way we need to.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Praise Jesus! Amen!

Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
This is soooooo beautiful, but sad also. my heart
broke right along that little boys. I had tears runinng down
my face when I finished reading it. Pearl you really
know how to get to the heart of it. Hugs and God bless you. Myrtle

Reviewed by M. Hammer (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Lovely poetry. It touches the soul.

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

A beautiful poetic composition... "A Little Boy's Prayer" sings
compassion and inspires humanity.

I did enjoy visiting Your Den, Poet!

May Your life be a long healthy one through a blissful creative living.

In gratitude and reverent admiration.



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 21, 2005
Such tears this brought on...quite beautiful, sorry it took so long to find it...Ed (Rufuz liked it too, woof)

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
Oh too touching. Tears filling my eyes. Just heart touching and breaking so beautifully written. Thenk You.
God Bless You and Your Family
Tracey

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
lovely work

Reviewed by adele holden (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
Wonderful Poem. Very Beautiful

Reviewed by Elaine Carey
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
really poignant

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2003
Beautiful write

Reviewed by Tony Channing
Reviewed on November 19, 2002
Simply beautiful

Reviewed by SUE ATKINS
Reviewed on November 10, 2002

Reviewed by elvia castillo (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2002
i wanted to know what happened to the father. but at the end it doesn't matter my heart solely swells for the boy. what innocense. i really like this

Reviewed on May 24, 2002
Wonderful poem Pearl, thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewed by chris cagle
Reviewed on May 4, 2002
great poem Pearl!!!!!!! i like it. mom said she liked it to. can't wait for more.

Reviewed by Sonuahua Compton
Reviewed on September 16, 2001
A sweet poem.My heart goes out to the little boy in the poem.


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