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Waiting for the Train
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Impatient, weary and care-laden man
Who tramps the platform in an anguished way,
Urging within the slow, reluctant train,
Why not stand still and watch the sparrows play?
The whole of Nature chirps and hops with glee
Amongst the sleepers and the carefree weeds,
Yet you just yearn to get from A to B
And want to fly there at the swiftest speeds.
Your thoughts already lost in papers grey,
And dreary files and faces blank and wan
Surrounded by a whirr and click that rules your day:
Soulless machines that take the place of men.
And having got there what do you do then?
You yearn impatient to be home again!

 

 
 

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 Reviews of "Waiting for the Train"
Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on March 5, 2007
good question and description...I wonder where his soul goes when he isn't there

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
With british rail. Just be glad a train came...

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Wonderful metaphors make this poem spring to life. We are walking along the station with that man, boarding, rushing...well done.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
What is this life if full of care we have no time to stand and stare? W.H. Davies got it right, Loretta. You've taken the time to slow down and watch the wheels turning. Aye, the thrushes and sparrows and their liquid song, taking life a whole lot easier than most of us. Best wishes. kenny

Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Great imagery

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
So sad that people tend to take life for granted. "Waiting for the Train" is a very delightful and inspiring prose that reminds us all to enjoy every minute. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria


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