This situation is intense baby..
The sweet thoughts you give me.
The feelings you smoothly give to me
are subliminal.
Hell, sometimes criminal
cause when i look in your eyes
and listen to your words
it's all good.
Then you throw me off balance
with confusion
Do you want me?
Do you need me?
What is this that we are doing?
Can you vocalize to me what you
were asking last night?
I wanna make sure I got this right
the first time....
Subliminally you got me going
analyzing conversations
and trying to read between the lines.
I am not inside your head, so please
try to help a sistah out.
Explain clearly to me what your needs are
and what you want from me.
Hell, this is too much dam work!
Sometimes when I'm with you , I feel like
I'm in Calculus.
Your vague emotions plus my confused feelings
equals so much damn confusion and I need
C L A R I T Y!!!!
Can you just tell me what you want
and need?
You keep saying you're simple
and that I'm complex.
What are you trying to say to me?
Make it simple.
Keep it plain.
Do you want me
Do you need me
cause I know what I want
and it's you.
Uncut and all dysfunctional
as it seems, we might be
perfect together.
(c) 2002 Mocha Sistah
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Reviewed by Dee
Reviewed on October 23, 2002
THATS DEEP!.....JUST LIKE DA OTHA POEMS U READ AT ASPIRA HIGH SKOO IN SANDRAS CLASS!IM ONE OF THE STUDENTS THAT WAS IN THE CLASSROOM!
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not really understood perfectly your angst
do you want me or not. rough draft or not, this is good
josie