Awakening (Senryu) (poem) by Taylor Ryan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Deborah Shepard

Reviewed on November 1, 2016

bautiful

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 9, 2015

Awakening with limbs entwined is the best way to greet a morning
But then there must be coffee :-)

Walt

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on January 13, 2011

Excellent work, Taylor. I did not realize I had been gone so long.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 29, 2010

A very beautiful and geometric write Taylor.

Your pen flows with solemn truth and profoundness.
Nice to read you again.

Love

Peter

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

I miss your poetry and your friendship

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

individually, these are splendid...together they are outstanding in every way. I am glad I found these in here tonight.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Beautiful Morning To You Taylor "Awakening (Senryu" is poetic beauty embracing the heart & soul of poetry
Very Lovely & Eloquent Piece
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You
Embraced~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 12, 2008

I love haiku. I love these, Taylor. The image that you have chosen very effectively complements your own lovely painting of words. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on November 9, 2008

Stunning!

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2008

What a vibrant awakening this Senryu trinity is for the reader to enjoy! You have not lost your touch, dear Taylor. The photo you have chosen to accompany this piece could not be more perfect. It is wonderful to be able to read your work again!
~Butch

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 27, 2008

This flows like a clear stream and, like the spaces between heartbeats, the imagery exudes creations mysteries. There is a satisfying mutualism you've created, dearest Taylor, between image and content in this.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on October 15, 2008

How beautiful and solftly presented. It is printed in my mind, and that is always god poetry. You have the touch, and your pen needs to be more active.
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Personal - I've been away for two weeks; getting the old body ready for the nest decade. Carotid artery surgery, and a pacemaker for longevity! Am on the mend,, after many flirtations with all the wonderful nurses and aids. But, I don't recommend it for time off. Am mending nicely. With love, - Bill

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 15, 2008

nice to read you Taylor, love the awakening

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2008

The sensuality of this poem is like a breath of fresh air, Taylor. Beautiful imagery. Lydi**

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

very nice!

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Good job, Taylor. Good to see you posting again.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

It's so nice to see your words at the Den again.. and as always your imagery and artistry with words is stunning...
hugs and love, Myrna

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Taylor, it's been too long...we need to see you here more often...Awakening is a spectacular geographic fusion of poetry's quill which coalesces with the sensual outline of nature's colorful vista of rebirth...every morning when we awaken...I see a woman's shapely figure in this mountain line (breasts) with veils layering the sky...see-through peek of spiritual awakening in the dance of clouds...it's poetry like this that stimulates our senses and motivates us to live each day to its fullest to be gifted with awakening each day with the serene self-certainty of creation's mystery...have a great fall season, Taylor...

Love,
Sage