I hope your cloud stays away. I'm lucky, my sunshine has fanned over my life for almost 45 years and it is still glowing strong.

rge

Nice poetry!
"Trust in the Lord with all you heart
and lean not to your own understanding.
In all ways, acknowledge Him and
He will direct your paths." Prov. 3:5-6

WELL SAID

Your poem is well written, but you have captured an important point in your poem. The sun has risen and the flowers bloom again, as you have said in your poem. Life never ends when someone rejects us. It only helps us to move on to form a stronger and better relationship with another person. It is painful when we must say goodbye, but think of how great it is that you have removed that cloud from the sky. How would you grow if that cloud stayed in your life? A magical poem with so much meaning.
Stop by my authors den if you have a chance, as I have written a poem about a rainbow that I saw once, and it appeared to me at a low point in my life. The power of that rainbow taught me that beauty does shine through, even after a loss.

All go through rejection and it hurts and it was a cloud on our lives. So true your words but we survive and go on again to sunnier days. Love, Lois

To everything there is a time and place. Including relationships. A very nice poem. Jon Michael Willey

well done enjoyed the read

Hindsight is sometimes the only way we can see the negative aspects in our life. Thank you, DL Mullan

Absolutely melancholic! But filled with hope.

Kathy

A very nice work on reflection of past...there is always a brighter day even after the clouds...


nice work.....




Art Sun...

Suzan, wonderfully put. I can surely relate to that.

always,
randy