Rhythmd and meter are first class, musical and easily flowing. What you say is very true, Miss Lorna, and realistically reflects basic experiences most people will be able to identify as their own, save those, of course, whom love has spared. :) Love is indeed the greatest insecurity there is and the greatest risk we ever run. But it is, paradoxically, also the only security, the only thing certain we can ever attain.
I like this poem, you see. I'd like to hear it set into music.
Reviewed by Desmond K'Owino (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2007
The author has done a commendable work in trying to package all these emotions of loveless, desperation, sadness, loneliness and uncertainty of being loved.
I miss the feeling
of your heart in my arms.
I miss the way
you would melt to my charms.
Dear Lorna...great opening verse....perfect...this is something which I will read again and again...written straight from the heart...cheers....love n luck....BHUWAN
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I like this poem, you see. I'd like to hear it set into music.
"Heart in my arms"
Heartfelt and a devine write.
Just simply loved it!
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
of your heart in my arms.
I miss the way
you would melt to my charms.
Dear Lorna...great opening verse....perfect...this is something which I will read again and again...written straight from the heart...cheers....love n luck....BHUWAN
Bom Bhole!
Roshan