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Immortality
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Someone cries in the middle of the night,

You wake up to the sound

The shadow eyes watching

The body hits the ground

 

Take cover take cover

A voice deep within

Clinching off the rage

Scaring away the sin

 

Marring imperfections

Sustaining obscurity

Constant reprimanding

Producing insecurity

 

Immoral attributes

Creating apathy

Procreating life

Obtaining Immortality

 

Someone cries in the middle of the night…

 
 


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Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Enjoyed this write, though perhaps on a defferent level than interpereted by some previous reviewers...no babies here. ('cept me) The only cries I hear in the night are from coyotes. Its hard for me ( a shallow guy :)to describe the feeling I get reading this, I have to say I love the introspective quality of this write.



Edwin


Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
My Nephew is eleven months old and it's the most amazing experience I have ever had!'
My sister n law and I often talk about the difficulties among the greatest of life's miracles!
Absolutely outstanding!
peace and healthy holy blessings ',..be excedingly well!
Rich Criso

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
A well penned powerful write

Peace & Love
William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Powerful sentiments and meaning, Crissy. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Awww, when my baby cried at the 2am wake up call i raced to feed him, nuking his bottle.
Yet my G/F can't have kids and this boy is brooooody..

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
We all have decisions to make,A strong write my friend,
Enjoyed,

Michael

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Crissy,

This is like getting hit between the eyes with the stick of reality. Fine writing.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
A very powerful write my friend, your words are emotional and strong...enjoyed the write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
very good poem
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
We all have our choice: the good or the bad. Your vision od procreating is excellent. Victor

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
A very emotional poem. Great write

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
I love that last stanza, and the ominous cry in the middle of the night. Good one, Crissy.

Brett


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