Another TOLT exercise. This was a study in syllabic blank verse on the subject of hygiene with a syllabic pattern 3,6,1,4,8,4,1,6,3. The more astute observer will see something particular about the pattern.
MY FAVOURITE PLACE A clean bed Is a hint of heaven Or, At least, cosy. When I slip between smooth, fresh sheets And nestle down I Am in my favourite place For Sleeping.
When I wake I am at peace, peaceful; Yet Ready to rise And face whatever the world has To offer me. Not Stressed or aching, not tired But ALIVE!
Well... I guess I am NOT an astute observer! hee, hee, hee...
I can't figure out the particularness of the pattern, but I just made up a new word... particularness. :~)
Keep writing...
Cryssa
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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I can't figure out the particularness of the pattern, but I just made up a new word... particularness. :~)
Keep writing...
Cryssa
Be always safe,
Karen