A Little Poem (poem) by Randall Davis Barfield on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Quite a storyteller you are, I can tell by this one. It is so entertaining I think any child would love it read to them.

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Charming and amusing. R

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 8, 2007

Clever verses, Randall. I like the way it flows. Imaginative! Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2007

Cute one.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Sweet- a child would!
I smiled myself~
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

fun poem, Ranall ... put a smile on me face ...

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on March 1, 2007

LOL! Great job, perfect childrens piece!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

Delightful rhyme, humor well written!

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

Funny poem, Randall. When you mentioned Gatorade, I laughed. I knew you were having some fun with this.

Brett

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

Enjoyed this much Randall...the teacher in me as well as a friend must say that I could envision this becoming a very cute childrens book that could teach rhyming words, which is a hard concept for young children, as well as teach maybe season, animals, the possibilities are endless! Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

This was cute, Randall. The "child" in me loved it! I loved the rhymes too. They painted quite the visual picture.

Jill

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

Smile, cute~I liked it!

Blessings to you Randall have a wonderful day.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

very nice!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

Imaginative poem, Randall! I enjoyed reading this! Excellent!

Blessings to you,
~Linda

Reviewed by Megan D'Souza

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

This is a lovely poem.....real cute one for a child. Good imagination and the rhyme scheme is steady. I enjoyed reading this! Great Write!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

I like the vision of mice with hammers! :)