When the wind is tired of no one noticing
its high pitched or low pitched singing
or its long whispering or gabled groaning,
when the wind is tired of its solitary existence
or its lonely castle and cold coral bed,
when the wind is tired of roaming alone
in the rain or in the scorching sun,
or through long days and long nights,
it suddenly comes roaring in vengeful rage
and tearing coasts and shores apart
with its tornado teeth,
or twisting its hurricane arms,
gathering idle and loitering wishy-washy elements
and arming them with velocity
and stones and mortars
to plunder and recreate landscapes,
uprooting walls, trees and barns,
and littering streets and everywhere
with tattered garbs and garbage,
to make a statement
no one will easily forget,
and make men weep in hysteria
in long solitary nights,
pulling their hairs in grave mourning
in the midst of the ruins.
Loneliness, a heart wounded and deserted,
a raging sea with misguided aggression,
a loose cannon of an angry hunter
sunk into the holy artery of a nun
who became lonely by choice, not by feeling.
Beautiful George. A great writer can make something we can't hold or touch seem human. This is exactly what you have done. Like anyone who tried to be noticed, to be counted as there, will slowly escalate their actions until eventually they explode from sorrow and loneliness. I so loved this, you are very talented.
WELL DONE! TWO THINGS THAT ONLY GOD CAN SUBDUE; THE WIND...AND... LONLINESS. A POWERFUL WORK FILLED WITH THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT SUPPORTS ITS THEME SOLIDLY. THANKS FOR SHARING. I WILL KEEP THIS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
This poem appears to have been written from a deep place in the soul. Your expressions of lonliness made me weep. Very strong poem that will leave no one unaffected. Joy Hale
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