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Stay With Me... A Little Longer
by Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel → (All Poetry by Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel)
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You whisper in my ear


"Take my heart with you - do you hear,


You need to bring it back to me


Intact without a tear"


 


Do you know what it's like to know real fear?


Slipping in and out, a bright white light


Not knowing… whether you are coming or going


That bright white shiny light, calling you... into the night


 


Feel the soft warm touch of your tear


Not wanting any harm to come


You whisper... "do you hear"?


"I need you... to stay near"!


 


“I need you... to stay a little longer


Even if it's only for a little while


Just to see once again that


Special gentle smile”.


 


“This cannot be your time


I still need you with me


To be mine even if only


for a very short time”.


 


 


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 Reviews of "Stay With Me... A Little Longer"
Reviewed by Ahmad Abang (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
There is fear here. The fear of being left alone to face his or he life. This work is beautiful.

Reviewed on December 21, 2007

"Stay With Me... A Little Longer" is a wonderful, inspiring and intriguing compostion in poetic excellence.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
Poignant message and well expressed. I enjoyed it.

Reviewed by Dawn Mullan
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
A great sense of loss is manifested in this poem, but also shsres hope. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on August 17, 2007
I truly enjoyed the feelings that you have expressed! This will most definitly keep poetry alive!


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