Natasha~ This is intense! Don't let your heart hurt too long!
When you least expect it (if you allow it) Truth and love will again find you and keep you!
GREAT touching poem!
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Natasha,
Welcome to our AD family.
For one so young, your thoughts are quite profound.
I admire your expressiveness and ability to use metaphors to convey your thoughts easily and clearly.
I look forward to more of your poetry.
Again, Welcome!

Please let Rose know that she ‘done good’ by getting you to join AD and share your works.

Kathy

What a beautiful, touching expression! You express truth much beyond your years.

Larry

Hi Natasha
An interesting write
Enjoyed reading
Peace be with you .....Welcome to The Den

William

Quite a statement in rolling poetic form, and I can see the reservations built brick by brick from the pain of the past, I also can see a quiet strength but...I hope that that wall doesn't come with a gate and a key that someday, someone worthy will find and be able to enter. This poem is intense for it echoes how much pain can shut down the emotional soul.
hugs
Fee

A tale of recovery, but, more of enlightenment. As with the rest of your works, this is well written. Thank you for sharing and being here at AD.
My best regards,
Chris

Natasha…(((WELCOME TO THE DEN))) my warm wishes to you. I am so proud of you for writing from your heart and displaying your excellent poetry. Make yourself comfortable and I will be waiting to read more of your writings…Big Hugs from a Den Granny…Peggy

Natasha, welcome to a great Internet Site, you'll love all the people here. There are some fantastic writers that you'll enjoy reading & the people here are as friendly as anyone would want. Your poem is written in a voice of a romantic reality that many people suffer but manages to recover without to much heartache. I also liked the rhyme & rhythm of your writing...it keeps the reader interested. I loved this line of your poem, "For I know that your fake plastic words," great metaphor. Have a great time here & I'll be reading & commenting on your work.

Natasha your words are very true and touching, and remember there are many who will be willing to mend those walls, fantastic write and may I be the first to welcome you to Ad's family where I am sure you will soon find you are part of us. Love you honey, Rose