You Make the Roses Beautiful (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 26, 2013

Thanks for the gift. I'll be using -you make the roses beautiful <---sure fire winner ;)

Fantastic poem, the ugly duckling, perceived, becomes the beautiful swan.

Here lies the making of an immortal fairy tale. xx

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on August 14, 2013

This is brilliant, I really loved it, ( and at some point I may steal your phrase, "You make the roses beautiful" to say to my wife with your permission,).
thank you for sharing this, it is such a lovely thing to read.
Steve

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

Fantasy??
and a very beautiful one at that
thank you Bernice for sharing this wonderful Gem
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Heart warming and heart wrenching. Liz

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

So heart touching and beautifully penned.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

The picture is fantastic,and your poem enhances it beautifully!
I love your fantasy mind;-)ET

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

This is wonderful. I love it. Write the story.
Love, ann

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Lovely, indeed as Vickie said, Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder..
Nice lesson,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Beauty Is Indeed In The Eyes Of The Beholder
& Even if she was a mag pie-black sheep...your lovely write gave her beauty
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

The eyes of the heart see only the grace of another precious soul who anoints his/her gaze with beauty, and sheds love and light wherever they are present. Such effect outdoes the bounds of nature itself. Wonderful perspective here which causes the reader to feel a shine from the inside out. TY Bernice. Kate xx

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

This makes me think of the movie Princess...very nice work, love Holly

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Yes, there you are telling us of yet another Humblebee.

Georg

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Captivating, romantic, and beautifully written! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

A wonderful tale expressing the inner beauty in us all, simply delightful....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

For this special someone was looking in her heart where true loves resides. Thank you for this write, it is indeed beautiful Bernice.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

You reveal a whole world of tenderness, beauty, insecurity and pain.
Wonderfully done.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

This is truly and honestly a write that should be published for it says so much about beauty and love. That line "You make the roses beautiful" is one of the most romantic and endearing one I have read in a very long time Bernice. Round of applause to you for this one for sure.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Watch out world !!! It doesn't get too much better than this.
" Her name is Isobel " " she was the black sheep of the family "
" a tear escaped from her jade blue eyes. " Bernice, you went
into another zone when you wrote this. All I can say about this
one is ~~ two thumbs up ... and the rest of my fingers, so I
might as well give you a high five ... how about two high fives.
Awesome !!!!!!!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Bernice,

Excellent - most beautiful, indeed.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Good for Isobel. And you too, Bernice. -gene.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

most certainly, a very creative blacksheep poetic story B, highlight, hugs and thanks

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Oh, oh, Oh!!! Maybe she is the Ogress!!! (or me...)
I love it!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Hi Bernice,a perfect story of prince charming riding on his horse and rescuing his princess who is hurt and thinks she is not worthy it.People need that little extra something to get through the days and to just get by in general.The man you express in that poem,I can see myself in him.You make the roses beautiful,but you make this poem beautiful as well.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

...to put the color in roses petals...is to find the color in one who receives them...beautiful.
wonderful write Bernice..
John

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

What a great story accompanied by a beautiful picture.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

The ugly duckling becomes a beautiful swan . . . Just like in the fairy tale . . . You have a wonderful way of taking on life's oddities and making a silk purse out of a pig's ear . . . bless you . . .

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Beauty abounds in your words, Bernice; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

The real beauty is within a person and if you find that you have found a gem.