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My Daddy Whittled Whistles from a Willow Tree
by Charlie → (All Poetry by Charlie)
Saturday, June 20, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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What we miss most are the simplest things.

My Daddy whittled whistles
from the willow tree—

while we waited for the water
to come licking hungrily.

 He whistled when he whittled,
while the water trickled through—
And finally filled the ditch enough
to set the siphon tubes.
 

Dad could set them single-handed,
with his thumb stuck up,
wooing water out the siphon
with a “gloob—glehb—glupp”

 Sometimes the sun sent messages
in coded smiles and winks—
glinting off th’ aluminum
of tubes and dams and things…

 And Dad would whittle whistles
out of nothing but the breeze—

His lips, a kind of pocket knife
that carved with practiced ease 

While we worked, he whistled birdsongs
like the meadowlarks' and robins'—

and he warbled with the best of them, 
whistling as we both went sloggin'

But when I went to whistle,
I only blew wet air—
I went to wet my whistle,
But the whistle wasn’t there…

I would blow and blow wet whispers,
while my dad smiled knowingly...
Then my dad would whittle a whistle
from a willow just for me.


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 Reviews of "My Daddy Whittled Whistles from a Willow Tree"
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 28, 2015
This remembering in your poetic voice is triumphant! He sounds like a wonderful mentor and mystic, like my own pop was, and you got lots of unconditional love and humor, the best gift anyone can ever receive.
Blessings, Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 21, 2015
That's a wonderful, lilting poem of how wonderful your father was to treat you with such talents and gifts.

One day I was whistling some mighty song very loudly when someone in my presence said, "Why don't you stop. All you are doing is blowing one note. You can't whistle!" So, I never whistled in public again. Once in a while when I'm alone, I do blow a few notes, but my ear cannot tell me whether or not I am carrying a tune like it can when I'm singing. Go figure?

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 21, 2015
I had an uncle who could carve whistles, and he, too, whistled along, and like you, I could never whistle a tune..

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 20, 2015
You're making me bawl. But finally!!! BAWL. Feels so good somehow. Love you too, Cryss. --Charlie

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 20, 2015
Sounds just like my dad!! ;)

I whistled with the best of them
when Dad whittled me a whistle
but willows love the water
and my whistle--not so much

My whistle cracked
my whistle dried
and then my whistle died...
My dad, the willow whittler, did the same

And Charlie, though her whistle
was nothing but a whisper,
inherited that whittling gift
in the form of words and poems

Love ya,
Crys...


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