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Incomers
by Edwin Hurdle → (All Poetry by Edwin Hurdle)
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                      "Incomers"

Our lives are rich by love.

We put it inside the wallets of our hearts

The relationship will never go broke

No one can take it from us

No one can destroy it for us

No one can steal it in front of us

A gift that's more powerful than anything else.

We're not outgoners,we're incomers

Incomers,incomers,In-com-ers

We're not outgoners,we're incomers

Incomers to the happiness of our lives

We're bless to share it.

We're bless to hold it.

We're bless to find it

I'm her guardian angel

She's my good luck charm

I'm her sweetheart instead of a sourheart

She's a letter cause she's so dear to me

We're not outgoners,we're incomers

Incomers,incomers,in-com-ers

We're not outgoners,we're incomers

Incomers to to happiness of our lives

Around the clock support,we're here for one another

No force of nature can ever separate our bond

It is safe without a bank

Our love is solid cause we're each other's rocks

We're not outgoners,we're incomers

Incomers,incomer,in-com-ers

We're not outgoners,we're incomers

Incomers to the happiness of our lives

 

Copyright(c)2009 Edwin Hurdle

 


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 Reviews of "Incomers"
Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
Beautifully written Edwin. I really enjoyed
reading this poem like I do all of the others.
What a powerful gift you have, thank you for
sharing and caring! May the Lord always bless
and sustain you in all that you maybe going
through!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Salome Rowe
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Hi, Edwin. This is beautiful. I love it. I understand it. I feel it, and, from your space you wrote it...That is how poetry reaches across universal differences and seeks out likenesses - 25 years of marriage, and I love Frankie and he does me, each "coming in", even more beautiful, giving, and exciting than the first... Thanks. Beautiful writing!! Salome

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 29, 2009
love in the upbeat tempo it truly deserves -- love, a potion peerless -- I really like the perspective you project on love in this poem Edwin -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed on July 24, 2009
Edwin...we are incomers...this is beautiful
I love these lines:

"The relationship will never go broke

No one can take it from us

No one can destroy it for us

No one can steal it in front of us

A gift that's more powerful than anything else."

Love & Blessings
Vickie


Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on July 24, 2009
We are all a part of the circle of love and life from it relationships are born. Thank you Edwin for reminding me and us how precious we are to one another! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 23, 2009
Yor love shines in many ways Edwin. I really like the consept of the poem....M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on July 23, 2009
There is no leaving with this kind of love. This is an enduring love. Very nice! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 23, 2009
Thank You Edwin
for sharing this outstanding write
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
You are a very lucky pair. Nicely done. Patrick

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Edwin,
Such optimism in an age of darkness and selfishness is not only refreshing and positive but truly admirable.

John

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Sweet write.

Reviewed by Diana May Waldman
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Yes, to love like that and be best friends is the ultimate.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
I like your sense of committment and conviction.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Dear Edwin, Yes we are all Incomers. We're not outgoners.
God Bless you and bless your life's companion.
Logve Emile

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Very sweet write, Edwin. I love your sense of optimism...we are similar souls....

Anna

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Great write, Edwin.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
In a year 2009 world of today, out there, are a lot of pickpocket thieves waiting for us to look to other way and relieve us of our heart wallets.
Edwin, you really are an optimist, God bless you.

Georg





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