And on the third day she mourned (poem) by Damaa -- on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2005

I'm with Felix on this one

straight out and true!!

honesty at its best... find yourself in your pain

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Painfully honest and powerfully emotive. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Powerfully simple, spare lines with strong emotion- my kind of poem.

Reviewed by Elaine Carey

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

This is beautiful and aching all at once!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

an emotively powerful poem about a situation seemingly out of your control and reason ...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

for sure girl! what have I done? I was abandoned at 12 years old, and have found a family here in AD. But I always second guess and always ask...What did I do that was so wrong to make my mother hate me so much? This is such a tearful and powerful write Blackberry that I did cry and mourn with you. thnx sister for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little den sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

ps: thnx for the reviews. They are very much needed and appreciated.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

It is so sad when we hang on someone like a life line. So many women and probably men alike, think without that person life is meanless. But hang on, you lived and breathed well before you met him!! Beautiful write Blackberry - as usual! Reminds me of mine - I Keep On Loving.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

poignant read

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

If he treated you like dirt you already know that it was for the best and though your poem expresses hurt it also has a glimmer of hope in that fact alone.

Felix

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

Oh so powerfully sad, this is outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

excellent write, berry! well done!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

tell her! good poem