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The Shopping Trip
by Alan Greenhalgh → (All Poetry by Alan Greenhalgh)
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A light-hearted poem about an Aussie country family's once a month shopping excursion in the 1950's. Commended by The Redlands Bush Poets Society of Queensland (1998)

Thirty miles to town on that long bumpy track,
Our '48 Chevvy's a reliable hack.
Dad's big hands holding the wheel,
Knuckles all white with their grip like steel.
Dodging the rocks and bone-shuddering ruts,
There's a squeakin', a rattlin' and loosening of nuts.

The old truck's no luxury means of travel,
But the miles her wheels will surely unravel.
Once used bya milko, she's got no doors,
Just flaps of canvas - no carpeted floors.
'Tis a hard ride to replenish the stores,
With kids on the back, their bottoms quite sore.

Thirty miles from Foxlow for a once-a-month treat,
To the Queanbeyan shops along the main street.
Dad's off to the pub for a beer or two,
Mum and the kids do the shopping, it's quite a "to do!"
On Saturday the shops are open until noon,
There's a lot to be done. Times gone quite soon.

The truck's loaded up with the kids sucking on sweets,
While dad staggers slightly along the main street.
He climbs in the front. The old engine roars to life.
It's off down the road, but they're headed for strife.
Ten miles from town they charge down a long hill,
The bend at the bottom proves more than a thrill.

The old Chevvy slews sideways. Wheels losing their grip.
She rolls down the bank and into a dip.
Groceries, kids and lollies all fly through space,
Tumbling over and over at a frightening pace!
In a cloud of dust and steam it all finally stops,
With wheels facing skyward at the end of the drop.

Mum's got a black eye. Dad's pride's been hurt,
The kids are alright. They're just covered in dirt!
As for the old Chevvy? She's seen the last of her days,
They wait for the tow truck, their minds in a haze,
At last the old truck's hoisted back on her wheels,
Taken by the wrecker with whom dad then deals.

With a '36 Ford sedan the old truck was replaced,
Although old, she's faithful. They were never disgraced.
For a few moments of indulgence dad paid a high price,
Kids now ride on real seats and the comfort is nice.
As for mum, when they asked her about her black eye?
"Walked into a door!" was her standard reply.   

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 Reviews of "The Shopping Trip"
Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
I so much enjoyed this poem! I especially like poems that tell a story and so I REALLY liked this one...but you definately have a gift with words. I felt like I was in that old '48 Chevvy truck!!
Thanks for the ride! I've been feeling down lately..but reading THE SHOPPING TRIP just tickled me. Excellent write Alan! : )
-zach

Reviewed by Leann Marshall
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Alan, I thoroughly enjoyed this--a poetic short story filled with nostalgia and adventure. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on December 24, 2007
Love this story, Alan. Though, in the first verse, one wonders who's nuts are being loosened. ;^p

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
A wonderful and most enchanting story....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Richard Swartz
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
this is funny but good and a good story line to it Grate Job and a Grate Wright...thanks for shearing it with us

Reviewed by Alan Greenhalgh
Reviewed on December 20, 2007


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