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Remember Me
by Ed J. → (All Poetry by Ed J.)
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This was a surprise poem from my dark side using words my loved one said to me when we had our first argument January 27, 2007,

 

So preciously I offer
My heart foever sworn
I view of all adored
My gift of words reborn

 

My world to fill desires
My all I stand to lose
Creative arts aspired
My words and drawings fused

 

So much of heart was given
That none remains to feel
Emotions no more driven
My world without a will

 

Devoted love was offered
A love of all returned
Sweet words were never softer
With lies, my soul they burned

 

Farewell my heart, my love my words
Creative hands lay still
Now gone the grace and beauty
That drove my loving will

 

 

 

I could no more forget you
Then my suffocating breaths
Shared dreams, be forfeit to
An abyss of empty depths

 

 

 

You'll always be remembered
For I gave you all I am
With losing you dismembered
Left a shell, that was a man

 

 

Goodbye my love

 

 
Copyrighted 2007 Ed J
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 Reviews of "Remember Me"
Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
No one could ever forget such a loving man unless they are deaf, blind and dumb, these words you have written just exemplify your passion and love.





Gail

Reviewed on April 25, 2009
Oh the pain of cutting words from a loved one - I know it too well!
You wrote this really from a heart that loved, "You'll always be remembered" is what we all can say for goodbyes can be said, but the heart never says goodbye.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Lovely. Reminds me of a verse penned for or by the late Brian Jones:
When this you see remember me
And bear me in your mind
Let all the world say what they may
Speak of me as you find.

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

A beautiful sad story said in poetic grand. "Remember Me" depicts a true heart under romantic love.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
well said and a good reflective write that sounds of peace through pain.

randy


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