So preciously I offer
My heart foever sworn
I view of all adored
My gift of words reborn
My world to fill desires
My all I stand to lose
Creative arts aspired
My words and drawings fused
So much of heart was given
That none remains to feel
Emotions no more driven
My world without a will
Devoted love was offered
A love of all returned
Sweet words were never softer
With lies, my soul they burned
Farewell my heart, my love my words
Creative hands lay still
Now gone the grace and beauty
That drove my loving will
I could no more forget you
Then my suffocating breaths
Shared dreams, be forfeit to
An abyss of empty depths
You'll always be remembered
For I gave you all I am
With losing you dismembered
Left a shell, that was a man
Goodbye my love
Gail
You wrote this really from a heart that loved, "You'll always be remembered" is what we all can say for goodbyes can be said, but the heart never says goodbye.
Cynthia
When this you see remember me
And bear me in your mind
Let all the world say what they may
Speak of me as you find.
A beautiful sad story said in poetic grand. "Remember Me" depicts a true heart under romantic love.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
randy