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Another Drink
by A. Keith Barton → (All Poetry by A. Keith Barton)
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Two sit at a bar and stare at their glasses
Life slowed now when once was fast
Another scotch for the lady here
Before I order another beer
Haven’t I seen you here before?
Jesus, this line works no more

Music drones on inaudible to some
The smoke-filled room overcomes
All sense of taste, smell, and touch
For unloved souls who suffer much
Lonely nights draw people in
For a ray of hope in this stranger’s den

Too much eye shadow and cologne
On faces wrinkled and forlorn
Another drink for my friend
Who sits by me at the end
Of life’s pleasures lost long ago
Drowned by tears and tales of woe

Adieu my lady for I must leave
Before you think me pitiful and naïve
Empty glasses left behind
A relic of the clouded mind
Depart I must before it’s too late
To save myself from a terrible fate

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 Reviews of "Another Drink"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Its an easy fate to slip into and one to avoid at all cost. Lonely hearts are very sad. Great capture of this moment.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Style and content are both excellent. Love it!

Reviewed on July 30, 2005
Ah, so very well written, you touched me with this excellent and insightful poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2005
This sums it up really, doesn't it? I couldn't agree more.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
nicely said

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2005
Stunning..

Reviewed by Leah Wilson
Reviewed on July 25, 2005
Yep!..Had you stayed, you may have fallen in love. And we all know where that road leads..lol I enjoyed! Leah C Wilson

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
ah, but is there more a terrible fate than lonliness? than again, maybe not ...

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
Wise man! Very wise man! Excellent write, Keith!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
what a true tale

well done!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
Excellent poem! very wise to listen to
the instincts to leave.

Eileen

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
Nice job. I felt the loneliness throughout, and then a little pick-me-up of hope and wisdom at the end, like maybe he finally woke up.


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