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My Christmas Hunch.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
Sunday, December 24, 2017    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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If Jesus could come visiting this Christmas
and watch us celebrating his big day,
would he be impressed at our festive best,
or our posh, oh gosh, so marvelous display?

If Jesus could be sitting at our table
and see our banquet (fit for royalty)
do you think he'd be so proud,
and cheer our efforts loud,
and thank us kindly for our loyalty?

If Jesus took a look at all our presents,,
and knew the cost we tossed away to buy,
and the magnitude of sweat
and work they took to get,
do you think there'd be amazement in his eye?

And if Jesus stood there watching us all shopping,
pushing through the crowds of Christmas rush,
do you think perhaps he'd wish us to be stopping?
or ponder on the things we want so much?
Do you think he'd look with pride
as we ride our Christmas tide,
without one thought of Bethlehem to touch?

I don't know why I am asking myself questions,
just feeling something doesn't feel quite right,
guess it's all the news,those threats of what we'll lose,
and sights of poor souls homeless in the night.

Just seems to me that something's not real balanced,
just seems to be for many death is near,
it's hard to listen totally to carols,
when threats of war continually are clear.
Just wondering ,
has Christmas LOST Christ's message?
I'm positive that Jesus left it once,
I'm thinking he might say;
'Forget this festive play,
just share love's PEACE,'
but hey,that's just my hunch. 

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 Reviews of "My Christmas Hunch."
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 26, 2017
While we could argue that our economy is boasted in many jobs are created by the Christmas rush to buy "stuff," I think Jesus, with his ascetic lifestyle, would find it quite disturbing. Like the time he went into the temple and threw the money changers out, Jesus might find it in his power to close the "too big to fail" banks and other companies that are a parasite on top of our economy sucking riches from fees and services to keep the greed growing.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on December 25, 2017
This is so true! Most of the time we spend shopping and trying to please people who already have so much, does not please our Father in Heaven. The heart of giving to the children who are homeless and have nothing is more pleasing to our Father. If we would all do a little bit to help those in need (without corrupt bandits stealing from the poor) this world would be a better place. Merry Christmas! Amen


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