His father taught him that the world was cruel
Dangerously inhabited by knaves and fools.
He showed his boy no mercy when
He failed to stand the test,
For he’d make him grow up strong, he said,
He’d make his son the best.
Spare the rod, his father said, and spoil
The wayward child.
So vigilant the father was, he never cracked
A smile.
Anger hand in hand with truth, or so his father said,
Would make a man out of the child, when wit
And wisdom wed.
So diligent, the father watched, and every word or deed
Was scrutinized and criticized and every bitter weed,
Drawn from the soil of a boy’s young heart
And crushed beneath the feet
Of the one who vowed to raise him right
By rigid force and creed,
Righteous acts with love amiss will spoil
The fertile sod.
The son he raised beneath the rod grew up
And cursed his God.
Regis
I believe that often times it is not what the parents intend to be like, but it is their own defense mechanism at what seems to be a battle of losing control...
Cryssa
I can relate to this as I myself have experienced life as this boy
but by the grace of God I was spared hatred & made my own footprints
Your words reach deep into the soul with profound expressions of love's imporatnce, the closing line just hits my soul hard....
Much Love & Continued Inspirations
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
In Spirit,
Bear
EDWIN
This is all of the things other reviewers have said so far: strong, interesting, heartbreaking and challenging and of course it calls into question the acts and skills of parenting and asks if there is a best way, a true way to resolve such a complex task. I really enjoyed this piece. Well done!
John
Fee
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.